StoryProgression по-русски: исправление ошибок перевода

[Aurora Nova]

KuriXarya,

ага, придется до первой насущной необходимости

 

[Rumiko]

экий "риторический" вопрос у меня всплыл =)

 

[KuriXarya]

Rumiko
Спасибо. Меня уже в это ткнули. Исправлю.

 

[Taril]

Полагаю, что первое имя неверно. Сима из этой пары, который мог набезобразничать, зовут Рудольф

 

[KuriXarya]

Спасибо.
Моя ошибка.

 

[Taril]

Еще мне кажется, что около слова "давай" нужно оставить только одну запятую.

 

[sh1ny]

Новая фаза StoryProgression вот-вот выйдет в свет вышла!!

Около часа назад Twallan изменил перевод StoryProgression Meanies. Итак:

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<STR>On-lookers were amused today by the sight of local {19.String}, {10.SimName}, being chased down the street by town thug, {0.SimName}. \n\nAccording to one witness, {10.SimFirstName} was screaming like a baby and was running so hard {12.String} got knocked clean out when {12.String} slammed into a brick wall. {0.SimName} apparently laughed so hard it hurt - but not so much that {2.String} couldn't bring {3.String}self to empty a bucket of trash over {10.SimFirstName}'s head before leaving.</STR>

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<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:VictimClumsy0</KEY>
<STR>The thug was in full force earlier performing {4.String} due diligence, by terrorizing the local populace. {10.SimName} unfortunately has been receiving the brunt of the attention, after tripping over {14.String} own shoelaces and accidentally bumping into {0.SimName}. {0.SimFirstName} took offense and retaliated, chucking {10.SimFirstName} into some nearby bramble bushes. Ouch!</STR>

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<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBully:Prank</KEY>
<STR>Bully Prank</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBully:Prank0</KEY>
<STR>"That malicious little wretch. Look at the mess {2.String} made of my house!" muttered {10.SimName}, the latest victim of the local bullies immature pranks. "Someone needs to teach that {0.SimName} some respect."</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBully:Prank1</KEY>
<STR>{0.SimName} was in some hot water with the {10.SimLastName} family, after apparently pranking {10.SimFirstName}'s house earlier. Though reports cannot outright link the local bully to the act, everyone pretty much knows {2.String} was responsible.</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBully:Prank2</KEY>
<STR>The sly devil! {0.SimName} showed once again why {2.String} is so good at being bad, by pranking the local household of {10.SimName} recently. The bully was heard to chuckle : "{16.String} did not even know I was there! What a geezer."</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBully:Prank3</KEY>
<STR>"Prank my house will {2.String} ?" muttered {10.SimName} after receiving an unwanted visit from the local bully recently. "We'll see who has the last laugh. If I catch {0.SimName} on my property again, I'm turning the garden hose on them right there and then!"</STR>
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<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBully:PrankChild</KEY>
<STR>Bully Prank</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBully:PrankChild0</KEY>
<STR>"That {0.SimName} is so mean!" cried {10.SimName}. "{6.String} came over to my house earlier and totally pranked my family. I was so embarassed, I don't know how I'll show my face at school again."</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBully:PrankChild1</KEY>
<STR>"It wasn't {10.SimName}'s fault apparently." commented a neighbor. "I hear that {0.SimName} is to blame for all the shenangagins earlier. Sounds like someone needed to close up a bit of mess after a prank or something like that."</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBully:PrankChild2</KEY>
<STR>"Waa Waa Waa, all I hear is a wee little baby crying. Boo Hoo." scoffed {0.SimName}. "Hey it was all in good fun, I had fun setting the prank, I had fun watching {10.SimName}'s family be pranked. Like I said all in good fun."</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBully:PrankChild3</KEY>
<STR>{10.SimName} was in tears recently, after learning that local bully {0.SimName} had targeted {14.String} house with a prank. "I don't want that big meanie anywhere near my house, he is so scary!"</STR>
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<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBully:PrankFail</KEY>
<STR>Bully Prank Fail</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBully:PrankFail0</KEY>
<STR>Oh dear, {0.SimName} got caught red-handed earlier attempting to set a prank at {10.SimName}'s residence. It is unfortunate one can't get thrown in jail for that sort of thing, considering how that bully acts around town.</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBully:PrankFail1</KEY>
<STR>"Hee hee, totally caught that klutz!" grinned {10.SimName}, after local bully, {0.SimName}, got caught in the act trying to set a prank in {10.SimFirstName}'s home. "He skedaddled pretty quickly after that, but I'm sure that wasn't the last we'll see of {3.String}."</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBully:PrankFail2</KEY>
<STR>Oh too bad, so sad, {0.SimName} got caught with {4.String} hand in the cookie jar, after trying to plant a prank at {10.SimName}'s home. All we have to say to that is : "Ha Ha."</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBully:PrankFail3</KEY>
<STR>"I want to believe that {0.SimName} has a good side, I really do." lamented {10.SimName}, "But {2.String} tried to set a prank off in my house, so I'm not really feeling all that understanding at the moment."</STR>
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<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBully:PrankHate</KEY>
<STR>Bully Prank Hate</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBully:PrankHate0</KEY>
<STR>"Never did understand why this town puts up with bullies like {0.SimName}." muttered {10.SimName}, "I mean did you see what that twerp did to my friend's house ? Sorry I can't begin to describe {3.String} in mixed company."</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBully:PrankHate1</KEY>
<STR>Local prankster and all around bad character had {10.SimName} in an uproar recently, and {12.String} learned of {0.SimName}'s antics over at a friend's house. "If I ever catch that bully red-handed, oh, {2.String} is going to pay."</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBully:PrankHate2</KEY>
<STR>"Given the state of this town, and its rampant criminal behavior, it is understandable that someone like {0.SimName} can get away with pranks like that." mentioned {10.SimName}. "No one seems to want to deal with this sort of thing. It is disgraceful."</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBully:PrankHate3</KEY>
<STR>"{0.SimName} is starting down a slippery path, I say." commented {10.SimName}. "First it is malicious little pranks, and soon it is armed robbery and grand theft auto. Someone had better straighten that kid out soon!"</STR>
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<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBully:PrankHateChild</KEY>
<STR>Bully Prank Hate</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBully:PrankHateChild0</KEY>
<STR>"I just want {3.String} to go away and stop bothering us. Why can't {0.SimFirstName} just leave me and my friends alone?" sobbed {10.SimName}, after hearing about a recent prank played by local bully, {0.SimName}.</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBully:PrankHateChild1</KEY>
<STR>{10.SimName} was very upset after hearing that the local bully had been up to {4.String} old tricks at a friend's house earlier. "It makes me so mad, I could just spit. Preferrably in {0.SimName}'s direction, and without {3.String} noticing of course."</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBully:PrankHateChild2</KEY>
<STR>"Pain Pain Go Away... And don't come back ever!" {10.SimName} was heard to chant. Let's hope it a little voodoo will help out when it comes to local bully {0.SimName}, it doesn't sound like anything is doing any good.</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBully:PrankHateChild3</KEY>
<STR>"My friend is in tears after that prank, and that bully {0.SimName} just stood there and snickered." commented {10.SimName}. "If I was only a little bigger, stronger, braver, and had a tank, I would totally take that bully on! Totally!"</STR>
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<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBrat:Prank</KEY>
<STR>Brat Prank</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBrat:Prank0</KEY>
<STR>Local brat {0.SimName} was in high spirits today, after word got around town that {4.String} latest prank at {10.SimName} was a success. Congratulations {0.SimFirstName}, I guess.</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBrat:Prank1</KEY>
<STR>"The parent's of {0.SimName} should reign in their child." commented the parents of {10.SimName}. "That brat sneaked onto our property, and set a prank. The next thing you know {2.String} will be vandalizing City Hall, and going on a killing spree! Something has to be done!"</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBrat:Prank2</KEY>
<STR>"I love my children dearly. But if they were as unruly as {0.SimName}, I would seriously thing about military boarding school." commented a local bystander, watching the fallout at {10.SimName}'s house, after a recent prank attack. "Discipline. That is the word of the day here. Discipline!"</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBrat:Prank3</KEY>
<STR>{10.SimName}'s household was in a frenzy recently looking for any further "gotchas" after a prank was discovered in their home. The family suspects that local brat {0.SimName} may be involved in the incident, and will be investigating further.</STR>
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<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBrat:PrankFail</KEY>
<STR>Brat Prank Fail</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBrat:PrankFail0</KEY>
<STR>"Hee hee, poor little {0.SimName}, totally got busted this time!" grinner {10.SimName}. "{8.String} devious plan to prank my house was thwarted at the last second. No one messes with my family!"</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBrat:PrankFail1</KEY>
<STR>Local mischief maker, {0.SimName}, found themselves in a little bit of a bind earlier, when {2.String} got caught trying to prank {10.SimName}'s home. The plan was foiled by a hawk-eyed family member, who promptly showed the little troublemaker the door out.</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBrat:PrankFail2</KEY>
<STR>The aptly named brat, {0.SimName} encountered some trouble earlier, attempting to complete {4.String} plans regarding the {10.SimLastName} residence. Upon entering the premises, {2.String} found {3.String}self being tracked by {10.SimName} constantly, and was simply unable to sneak away. Darn shame that.</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBrat:PrankFail3</KEY>
<STR>"I want everyone to know that {0.SimName} is not my friend." commented {10.SimName}, "And {4.String} recent, and may I add, totally unsuccessful, attempt to prank my house should be evidence enough to back that up. Case closed."</STR>
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<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:MarriedDumped</KEY>
<STR>Thug Married Dumped</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:MarriedDumped0</KEY>
<STR>"Serves the nasty thug right, being dumped like that!" commented a friend of the thug's ex, {10.SimName}. "{0.SimName} cannot just go around beating hapless sims up for the fun of it and expect people to stick by them."</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:MarriedDumped1</KEY>
<STR>{0.SimName}'s marriage is over, after {10.SimName} simply got fed up and left the thug. "I could not put up with {0.SimFirstName} getting {4.String} jollies punching sims in the head anymore, so I left."</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:MarriedDumped2</KEY>
<STR>In a widely anticipated move, {10.SimName} has chosen to end {13.String} marriage to local Thug, {0.SimName}. "Frankly," commented a local source, "We are amazed that the two lasted as long as they did."</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:MarriedDumped3</KEY>
<STR>Too bad, so sad. Local thug, {0.SimName} is now single once again, after having been left by {10.SimName}. Better luck next time {0.SimFirstName}, you'll probably fare better getting a punching bag next time, rather than another spouse!</STR>
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<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:NewFlirt</KEY>
<STR>Thug New Flirt</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:NewFlirt0</KEY>
<STR>Some sims are just attracted to danger by the looks of it. {10.SimName} has recently been seen on the arm of local bad sim, {0.SimName}, taking in the small amount of love that thug has to offer.</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:NewFlirt1</KEY>
<STR>I guess even thugs need love too, maybe even more than others. {10.SimName} is trying {13.String} best to break through that tough outer shell of meanness that is {0.SimName}.</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:NewFlirt2</KEY>
<STR>"{0.SimName} is so fascinating, don't ya know?" sighed {10.SimName}, "It may be a work in progress, I'll give you that, but I'm up for the challenge." We wish you luck breaking through to that thug {10.SimFirstName}, but we are not laying any money on those odds!</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:NewFlirt3</KEY>
<STR>Being a sim of few words, {0.SimName} was trite and to-the-point when confronted about {4.String} latest date with {10.SimName}. Before trying to make us eat our note pad, {2.String} was heard to grunt something about {10.SimFirstName} being "wicked tasty".</STR>
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<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:MarriedDumped</KEY>
<STR>Harpy Married Dumped</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:MarriedDumped0</KEY>
<STR>Appears that {0.SimName} and {10.SimName} have decided to end their marriage. Rumor has it that some prodding from a local Harpy may have encouraged the whole ordeal.</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:MarriedDumped1</KEY>
<STR>"I'm not really sure what I feel about the whole thing," lamented {10.SimName}, "It was pretty just as much my fault as anyone else's that my marriage to {0.SimFirstName} did not work out. I can't really blame {3.String} for leaving me."</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:MarriedDumped2</KEY>
<STR>The marriage between {0.SimName} and {10.SimName} is at an end, but the fallout and recriminations have just begun. There are suspicions around town that a harpy may have been involved in the breakup, but who are we to spread just vile rumors!</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:MarriedDumped3</KEY>
<STR>"It's done, we just could not take the strain any longer," sobbed {10.SimName}. "After all the torment from that harpy, {0.SimNane} and I just could not live together any longer, our marriage is finished."</STR>
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<STR>Harpy Early Flirt</STR>
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<STR>Harpy New Flirt</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:OldFlirt</KEY>
<STR>Harpy Old Flirt</STR>

<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:EarlyFlirt</KEY>
<STR>Thug Early Flirt</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:OldFlirt</KEY>
<STR>Thug Old Flirt</STR>

<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBully:AttackChild</KEY>
<STR>Bully Attack</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBully:AttackChild0</KEY>
<STR>"Oh, you're such a little baby, you want your mommy? Huh, little baby?" sneered {0.SimName}, after tripping {10.SimName} and then shoving {14.String} face into the mud. "Go on run back home and crawl back into your crib!"</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBully:AttackChild1</KEY>
<STR>{0.SimName} was in full force recently, shoving poor {10.SimName} around. Unfortunately, {10.SimFirstName} was simply no match for the oversized Bully, and found {13.String}self face first in the dirt several times before {0.SimFirstName} got bored.</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBully:AttackChild2</KEY>
<STR>"Just keeping the little freaks in line." commented {0.SimName}, "If you don't show sims like {10.SimName} who is boss, they start to think they can stand up to you and stuff. Can't have that!"</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownBully:AttackChild3</KEY>
<STR>{10.SimName} was simply unable to run fast enough to escape the reach of {0.SimName}. A quick grab at {14.String} shirt was allow that was needed to drop {10.SimFirstName} into the mud. {0.SimFirstName} just snickered, kicked some more dirt in the poor sim's face, and mosied off to find something more exciting to do.</STR>
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<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:SteadyTryst</KEY>
<STR>Thug Steady Tryst</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:SteadyTryst0</KEY>
<STR>Stepping out on your partner? No problem, if you are the Thug apparently. {0.SimName} and {10.SimName} have been being rather open about their relationship.</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:SteadyTryst1</KEY>
<STR>{0.SimName} has been working {4.String} Thug mojo, messing around with {10.SimName}. Who is going to mess with {3.String} anyways? You are likely to just get your nose smashed in.</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:SteadyTryst2</KEY>
<STR>"{6.String} is so powerful." sighed {10.SimName}, "With {0.SimName} in my arms, I tend to forget about the whole partner thing."</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:SteadyTryst3</KEY>
<STR>Steady relationships? Not when you are dealing with the Thug. {0.SimName} simply sees what {2.String} wants, and takes it, with {4.String} most recent conquest being {10.SimName}!</STR>
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<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:MarriedTryst</KEY>
<STR>Thug Married Tryst</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:MarriedTryst0</KEY>
<STR>Being a Thug means you don't need to follow those annoying litle rules set out by society, as {0.SimName} has been seen out and about with {10.SimName}. Marriage be damned!</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:MarriedTryst1</KEY>
<STR>"Marriage? What is that but a silly set of rules that 'The Man' set down to keep us in line." remarked {0.SimName}, "{10.SimName} and I don't bother with such things."</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:MarriedTryst2</KEY>
<STR>"It is true," sighed {10.SimName}. "The love between {0.SimName} and myself knows no bounds, and won't be constrained by societies rules about marriage. If you don't like it, take it up with {0.SimFirstName}'s fists!"</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:MarriedTryst3</KEY>
<STR>Thug love! {10.SimName} has been seen cavorting with local ruffian, {0.SimName}, disregarding that fact that marriage usually frowns on such things. Who is going to speak up when the Thug is involved?</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:MarriedTryst4</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:MarriedTryst5</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:MarriedTryst6</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:MarriedTryst7</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:MarriedTryst8</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:MarriedTryst9</KEY>
<STR></STR>

<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:SteadyDumped</KEY>
<STR>Harpy Steady Dumped</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:SteadyDumped0</KEY>
<STR>Whoops, the Harpy has struck again, with the recent breakup of {0.SimName} and {10.SimName}.</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:SteadyDumped1</KEY>
<STR>{0.SimName} and {10.SimName} have decided it is for the best that they part company. There are some rumors that the Harpy may have been involved in the breakup.</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:SteadyDumped2</KEY>
<STR>{0.SimName}'s relationship with {10.SimName} is at an end, after {10.SimFirstName} got wind of some recent Harpy dealings.</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:SteadyDumped3</KEY>
<STR>"I have had enough of all that Harpy nonsense, and decided to leave {3.String}." remarked {10.SimName}, after a friend asked about {14.String} recent breakup with {0.SimName}.</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:SteadyDumped4</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:SteadyDumped5</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:SteadyDumped6</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:SteadyDumped7</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:SteadyDumped8</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:SteadyDumped9</KEY>
<STR></STR>

<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:SteadyDumped</KEY>
<STR>Thug Steady Dumped</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:SteadyDumped0</KEY>
<STR>Don't mess around when the Thug is involved! Just ask {10.SimName} after some recent events regarding the ruffian ended a relationship between {13.String} and {0.SimName}.</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:SteadyDumped1</KEY>
<STR>Uh oh, {10.SimName} has had enough of {0.SimName}'s thuggish dealings and decided to leave {3.String}.</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:SteadyDumped2</KEY>
<STR>{10.SimName} has decided to part ways with {0.SimName}, citing some recent Thug-related activities as the cause of the breakup.</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:SteadyDumped3</KEY>
<STR>"Nope, I just don't want to deal with {0.SimName} anymore, so I'm outta here!" grunted {10.SimName}, while hauling {14.String} stuff out of the house. "Too much Thug garbage going on for me to deal with."</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:SteadyDumped4</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:SteadyDumped5</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:SteadyDumped6</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:SteadyDumped7</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:SteadyDumped8</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:SteadyDumped9</KEY>
<STR></STR>

<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:SteadyTryst</KEY>
<STR>Harpy Steady Tryst</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:SteadyTryst0</KEY>
<STR>Gleefully delicious! {0.SimName} and {10.SimName} have been seen cavorting publicly around town, with no regard to existing romantic attachments.</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:SteadyTryst1</KEY>
<STR>"The Harpy made me do it! And do it over and over again." grinned {10.SimName}, after being seen messing around with one of the local hags, {0.SimName}.</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:SteadyTryst2</KEY>
<STR>"You cannot do better than me, obviously." commented {0.SimName}, "I can see how {10.SimName} would throw caution, and that other harlot, to the wind and go out with me."</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:SteadyTryst3</KEY>
<STR>Local Harpy, {0.SimName} had {4.String} talons deep into {10.SimName} recently, so much so that {10.SimFirstName} apparently forget about {14.String} other partner. Let's hope that doesn't come back and bite {13.String} in the hignie.</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:SteadyTryst4</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:SteadyTryst5</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:SteadyTryst6</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:SteadyTryst7</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:SteadyTryst8</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:SteadyTryst9</KEY>
<STR></STR>

<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:Party</KEY>
<STR>Harpy Party</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:Party0</KEY>
<STR>"What you weren't invited? Well, do you really need to explain why, or are you just that thick?" scoffed {0.SimName}, commenting about the guest list for {4.String} latest party.</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:Party1</KEY>
<STR>Crash this party, only if you dare. {0.SimName}'s guest list for {4.String} latest shindig is pretty exclusive, and showing up uninvited may simply get you berated and shunned. You have been warned!</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:Party2</KEY>
<STR>"To what party are you referring? I don't know any such thing, especially in regards to you." snickered {0.SimName}. "It would not be much of a party if you were invited, now would it? Really, get a clue!"</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:Party3</KEY>
<STR>{0.SimName}'s parties can be pretty wild affairs, but only for those special few that fit {0.SimFirstName}'s definition of good people. Everyone else need not apply, and may want to avoid {10.String} entirely.</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:Party4</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:Party5</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:Party6</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:Party7</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:Party8</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:Party9</KEY>
<STR></STR>

<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:Familiar</KEY>
<STR>Harpy Familiar</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:Familiar0</KEY>
<STR>"Well, obviously all the really cool sims have dogs. Why don't you?" quiped {0.SimName}, after adopting {4.String} brand new pup, {10.SimFirstName}.</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:Familiar1</KEY>
<STR>"Sorry, did I give the impression that you had any taste? My apologies." snorted {0.SimName}. "Only sims that have style should own a dog like {10.SimFirstName}, and we can both agree that is not you."</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:Familiar2</KEY>
<STR>{10.SimFirstName} has a new home in the handbag of {0.SimName}, as the Harpy's newest fashion statement. "Everyone is getting one, doesn't the little darling totally make this outfit pop?"</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:Familiar3</KEY>
<STR>{10.SimName} has a new acquisition to make {3.String} stand apart from that other 'riffraff' in town: A brand new dog named {10.SimFirstName}! I'm sure {2.String} will be lauding {4.String} even grander fabulousness soon enough, to everyone who doesn't care.</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:Familiar4</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:Familiar5</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:Familiar6</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:Familiar7</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:Familiar8</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownHarpy:Familiar9</KEY>
<STR></STR>

<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:Familiar</KEY>
<STR>Thug Familiar</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:Familiar0</KEY>
<STR>Maybe a dog will mellow the Thug out, ya right, who are we kidding? {0.SimName} is now the proud owner of {10.SimFirstName}, scary!</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:Familiar1</KEY>
<STR>Grrr! A dangerous flurry of fur and teeth, or a big foot warmer in the making? Only time will tell how {10.SimFirstName} will grow up until the tutelage of the Thug, {0.SimName}!</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:Familiar2</KEY>
<STR>Apparently if you are {0.SimName} then you don't have to care what other sims think. Take for example, {4.String} recent adoption of {10.SimFirstName}. Having a dog that size in the hands of the Thug does not sound like the best choice for the community at large.</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:Familiar3</KEY>
<STR>Uh, does anyone think that the {0.SimName} owning a dog with big sharp teeth is a good thing? Well, we certainly don't, but obviously the Thug did not consult us before adopting {10.SimFirstName}.</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:Familiar4</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:Familiar5</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:Familiar6</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:Familiar7</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:Familiar8</KEY>
<STR></STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownThug:Familiar9</KEY>
<STR></STR>

StoryProgression Expanded Russian:
Изменений слишком много, я веду собственный контроль версий: http://bitbucket.org/sh1ny/sh1ny/changeset/bb5a12aada9e

StoryProgression CopsAndRobbers Russian:
http://bitbucket.org/sh1ny/sh1ny/changeset/43db29759801

StoryProgression Lovers Russian:
http://bitbucket.org/sh1ny/sh1ny/changeset/34dcc742781d

StoryProgression Russian:
http://bitbucket.org/sh1ny/sh1ny/changeset/3a0d37451fa1
Начнем перевод?
К тому же, чувствую, скоро обновятся переводы и других модулей Чувство не подвело. Обновились.

P.S. мое сотое сообщение на миХее

 

[KuriXarya]

sh1ny, поздравляю с сотым постом!

Ура, теперь мы в два раза больше сена накосим быстрее переведем!
twallan пока придерживает SP Others - пишет новых личностей. Что-то меня это пугает, чем еще он нагрузит мод?

Ты что-то уже начал переводить? Давай, я возьму базовый мод, Extra и Expanded? Если, конечно, ты какой-то из них уже не переводишь.

Читать дальше...

Я не хочу переводить прямо на его странице, лучше скопирую, потом вставлю.

 

[sh1ny]

KuriXarya,
Спасибо. Я еще ничего не переводил (как будто мне официальной вики мало )
Без проблем, если будут какие-то вопросы, обсудим. Я перевожу, используя локальный репозиторий с децентрализованной системой контроля версий. Ну привык я так, что с меня взять
Вся моя работа по переводам доступна по ссылкам выше (https://bitbucket.org/sh1ny/sh1ny/changesets), если в сообщении указано synced with wiki, то оное не является моим инкрементальным переводом или прежде я писал в вики, а затем переносил результат в репозиторий.

 

[KuriXarya]

Тогда ты занимайся *викой*, а я буду потихоньку переводить мод. До аддона времени еще куча.

 

[sh1ny]

KuriXarya,
Нет уж, вика викой, а моды в первую очередь. Пока хотя бы базовый и расширенный начни, а там посмотрим.

 

[sh1ny]

Привет.

<STR>{0.SimName} has been receiving grief from the local community, for {4.String} nefarious actions around town. This time it was {0.SimName} choosing to speak out, though only after downing a couple of drinks beforehand.</STR>

Тут что-то twallan намудрил.

<STR>{0.SimName} навлек на себя, по меньшей мере, непонимание со стороны горожан за свои бесславные деяния. Причиной тому стал {0.SimName}, выдавший {4.String} с потрохами за парой стаканов нектара.</STR>

На месте второго {0.SimName} должен стоять {10.SimName}, или я неправильно перевожу предложение?

Читать дальше...

<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownCat:Familiar</KEY>
<STR>Cat Familiar</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownCat:Familiar0</KEY>
<STR>Should we read anything into the fact that {0.SimName} just adopted a cat? Nope, we are not reading anything into {10.SimFirstName}'s adoption at all, not at all.</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownCat:Familiar1</KEY>
<STR>Most of the town thinks it is quite fitting that {0.SimName} chose {10.SimFirstName} to live with {3.String}. I mean what would be more fitting than a kitty for the notorious Town Cat?</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownCat:Familiar2</KEY>
<STR>"Yes, I adopted {10.SimFirstName} on the level, why does everyone think I steal everything I own?" whined {0.SimName}. "I don't know where everyone keeps getting those totally untruthful impressions of me!"</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.TownCat:Familiar3</KEY>
<STR>Meow! Truly a match made in heaven, or rather the pet store. {0.SimName} has picked up a brand new kitty by the name of {10.SimFirstName}.</STR>

Здесь идут замечательные аллюзии "Town Cat" (это как "Женщина-Кошка" - неуловимая воровка, отличается от робина меркантильностью, в нашем переводе - Злой вор) и котят, которых он(а) приютил(а). Жаль, что в нашем переводе это обыграть со "Злым вором" не выйдет

Если по умолчанию "Town Cat" может быть только симка, то стоит, наверное, изменить все строки перевода с "Town Cat" на соответствующие (как Женщина-Кошка или что-либо более соответствующее игровому сеттингу).

Изменил перевод в компоненте Lovers, который ну никак не поддерживал однополые пары в ситуациях с TownBike + небольшие фиксы.

 

[KuriXarya]

На месте второго {0.SimName} должен стоять {10.SimName}, или я неправильно перевожу предложение?

Конечно, должно быть {10.SimName}. Или взамен можно использовать что-то вроде "слишком болтливый сосед/свидетель" без упоминания имени.
Такое у автора бывает. В предыдущем стринге (...Disapproval1</KEY>) он вообще не указал {0.SimName} - главного виновника сообщения.
И ты правильно сделал, что не оставил {4.String} в тексте.

Если по умолчанию "Town Cat" может быть только симка, то стоит, наверное, изменить все строки перевода с "Town Cat" на соответствующие (как Женщина-Кошка или что-либо более соответствующее игровому сеттингу).

Вот тут я лопухнулась при переводе. В опциях Town Cat нет строчки Allow All Genders. А я-то старалась, расписывала все теги. Надо было сразу исходить из того, что тут в основе лежит киношный персонаж.
Подозреваю, что подобное может встретиться и в других личностях. Спасибо, что обратил внимание.
Возьмешься изменить перевод Town Cat в соответствии со своим пониманием этой роли? Я потом просмотрю все личности, когда будет время. Сейчас занимаюсь базовым модом.

 

[sh1ny]

KuriXarya,
Я вообще-то оставил {x.String} по всем переводам, более того, я подкорректировал соответствующие местоимения в главном переводе. Я до конца разобрался как с ними справляться - это помогает мне избежать некоторых дубляжей строк типа _Female, _MaleFemale и _FemaleFemale.

Конечно, я займусь переводом Town Cat раз обнаружил это.

 

[KuriXarya]

sh1ny, может, тогда лучше переписать местоимения, чтобы начинались не с заглавной буквы? В середине предложения Он или Его не будут смотреться.

 

[sh1ny]

KuriXarya,
Я использую как строчные местоимения, так и местоимения с заглавной буквы. Там все есть.

<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.Stories:HumanPronoun1</KEY>
<STR>мужчина</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.Stories:HumanPronoun2</KEY>
<STR>он</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.Stories:HumanPronoun3</KEY>
<STR>ему</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.Stories:HumanPronoun4</KEY>
<STR>его</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.Stories:HumanPronoun5</KEY>
<STR>мальчик</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.Stories:HumanPronoun6</KEY>
<STR>Он</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.Stories:HumanPronoun7</KEY>
<STR>Ему</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.Stories:HumanPronoun8</KEY>
<STR>Его</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.Stories:HumanBaby</KEY>
<STR>мальчик</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.Stories:HumanToddler</KEY>
<STR>мальчик</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.Stories:HumanChild</KEY>
<STR>мальчик</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.Stories:HumanYoungAdult</KEY>
<STR>парень</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.Stories:HumanAdult</KEY>
<STR>мужчина</STR>
<KEY>NRaas.StoryProgression.Stories:HumanElder</KEY>
<STR>старик</STR>

 

[KuriXarya]

Или автор специально ввел "He" и прочее? Их раньше не было. Тогда, наверное, ты прав.

 

[sh1ny]

KuriXarya,
"Не"? Поясни, пожалуйста.

 

[KuriXarya]

Игра план покажет. Будут ошибки - нам их здесь выложат.

----------

He (англ.) и все остальные местоимения, написанные с заглавной буквы.

 

[sh1ny]

KuriXarya,
Оу, это английский. Как-то не сразу понял.
Да, они были в женских местоимениях в капитализированном варианте, мне оставалось лишь "допилить" мужские.

Я думаю, что нам предстоит решить, как быть с этими местоимениями. Было бы очень удобно ввести такие распространенные формы гендерных различий глаголов как "...а ". Тогда еще пару десятков дублированных строк можно будет избежать. Да и вообще два "мальчика" там, по-моему, не нужны